tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post919197139934330218..comments2023-07-08T20:24:42.058+05:30Comments on The Untrailed Path of Man of Wisdom: The boy, the mother and the cherry tree - A touching short storyAlok Sharmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15280424801691019074noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-86605532494693275812011-10-25T22:30:37.949+05:302011-10-25T22:30:37.949+05:30I come here often. Finally you posted something. L...I come here often. Finally you posted something. Like always, great! A nice dose of emotions, now we need motivation. Hope you'll soon post something inspirational. I subscribed to the email as you suggested and I found about this and came running here.<br />Really good.<br />I found a mentor in you on this blog, on your facebook page and on your twitter. Never knew could make use of these websites for my uplifting and good.<br />Thanks for all the good things you brought in my life.<br />Regards<br />ChrisChrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-73637667653648001632011-10-25T22:24:55.727+05:302011-10-25T22:24:55.727+05:30Good story. Keep doin it.
-PhillGood story. Keep doin it.<br />-PhillPhillnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-55396346051284281582011-10-25T22:23:45.694+05:302011-10-25T22:23:45.694+05:30Nice man, nice. A good show of boy's emotional...Nice man, nice. A good show of boy's emotional transition from sad to happy and that through a immobile cherry tree that doesn't speak doesn't do anything. You know how to work with emtions. Great effort.<br />Alan RickmanAlan Rickmannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-86228168564444539062011-10-25T22:18:13.115+05:302011-10-25T22:18:13.115+05:30Thanks Louis for providing your precious feedback...Thanks Louis for providing your precious feedback. The boy's emotions were described for a little child. You're absolutely right about the cherry tree and mother relation, it could be better but again it won't be 1 minute read.<br />I am actually working on design, will soon make the changes public.<br />Thanks for your kind words about the poem. It was written through a real difficult time so it speaks for itself. May be if that poem hadn't been written I won't be here nor the blog. It saved me, my life, the whole concept and character of Man of Wisdom.<br />Would surely try to keep up with your expectations in the future.<br />Thanks.<br />Light and Love to you too.Alok Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15280424801691019074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-51970596920734322172011-10-25T22:12:36.298+05:302011-10-25T22:12:36.298+05:30Hey!
Good story. It is actually touching, the way ...Hey!<br />Good story. It is actually touching, the way boy acted was obvious. He needed affection and he needed to find his mother. The cherry tree provided him with affection and gave a bit of reflection of his mother too. The boy's emotions are described in a great way.<br />The way cherry tree has been shown to fill the presence of mother could be better but then it won't be a "1 minute read".<br />I really appreciate the content of your blog. The design is good but work on it. It can be better. The poem <b>"Through the dark times"</b> is probably the most rhyming, most inspirational poem I ever read. It actually motivates and inspires.<br />Looking for great content in future too.<br />Lots of Love and Light,<br />Louis.Louisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-11901567958882998392011-10-25T21:34:04.724+05:302011-10-25T21:34:04.724+05:30Yes Julia, this story was a short one. Its called ...Yes Julia, this story was a short one. Its called one minute read. Lets share it on twitter and facebook page.<br />Thanks for your kind words.Alok Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15280424801691019074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-86435372906676736672011-10-25T21:33:08.174+05:302011-10-25T21:33:08.174+05:30Wow, very short story. It took less than one minut...Wow, very short story. It took less than one minute to read it. I think its smaller than the one in which the Godess of Earth and the God involved.<br />Keep posting the great content.<br />-JuliaJulia Britsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-749238846132725172011-10-25T21:31:24.981+05:302011-10-25T21:31:24.981+05:30Thanks Bill. The story about the merchant is calle...Thanks Bill. The story about the merchant is called "The secret of Peace and Happiness". Would post it by the next week.<br />It would be a bit long but would probably be worth reading, I promise.<br />Thanks, the poem makes my day too :)Alok Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15280424801691019074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2933210176333314422.post-54627304758568740852011-10-25T21:28:23.196+05:302011-10-25T21:28:23.196+05:30Great story. A delighting one. When would you post...Great story. A delighting one. When would you post the story about the merchant? You promised earlier? I really want to read that!<br />And the poem <b>"Through the Dark Times"</b>, it just makes my day.<br />Regards.<br />BillBill Osbornnoreply@blogger.com